My narrative on the lollies

Once there was a girl could Winzey, she always get into trouble and she doesn’t like her family that much because her mum so very nosey. Her mum came in she said “why are you still up”.  You suppose to be asleep, remember you have to sale lollies in the morning, “you can have the leftovers” “okay i will mum” she said. Her mum asked “can you please stop calling me that” Winzey replied “what should i call you then” “call me wicked mum”  “okay wicked mum” Winzey thought this was really weird. The next morning WInzey and her mum  went out and brought some lollies so they could sale them,  there is 22 million lollies in Auckland, WInzey and her mum brought  spend $1500 buying all kinds of lollies. “Wake up, wake up” her mum said “you can’t be sleeping you have lollies to sale” but Winzey didn’t want to GET UP!! “Mum I’m sleeping!” “remember you have to sale some  lollies” her mum said. WInzey got up and went to go and sale lollies at people’s doorsteps. While she was out  she sang a song her song was about  selling lollies at random people’s houses. She sang and sang while she was walking, she went to this really big fancy house ,she knocked on the door and a man answered, she asked “would you like to buy some lollies” and he replied “okay then, what do you have in there? she said “I have bubble gum, chocolate, when he heard  the word chocolate  he said “how much for the chocolate” “It’s $2” replied Winzey. “I’ll take 15” the man replied, that will be $30 sir” the man paid Winzey and asked her to come back soon with more chocolate. Winzey carried on knocking on peoples doors until it was time to head home, when she got home her mum asked her “how much did you sell today” “ 15 chocolate bars and 30 bubble gums” she replied. “Wow! her mum said how much did you make” “$60” Winzey mum was very proud. “That’s enough selling for one week” you can have the rest” Winzey was very happy, she couldn’t wait until she was allowed to sell more lollies again. The end